D&AD : Group Crit

After demo-ing my work to the class it was decided that my work needed to be sped up a little and for the audio to be edited so there wernt so many gaps to keep the viewers attention. I managed to get my video cut down form 3:58 to 3:28. It was also suggested by Andrew that I make the camera movement more dynamic to make it a bit more exciting. I tried out this method but did not feel I could achieve a look that I felt looked good enough to be submitted for the D&AD.